If you asked me, I think your paragraphs were a little short.
I think you had to short of paragraphs as joey said. You could incorperate more info into your voice so it would be more interesting.
If you asked me, I think your paragraphs were a little short.
ReplyDeleteI think you had to short of paragraphs as joey said. You could incorperate more info into your voice so it would be more interesting.
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